Sunday, 2 November 2014

Non-Fiction Prose Assessment Piece

The Cartwheel Pub:
Recently I travelled to the Cartwheel pub in Bristol. I had read the reviews and it seemed like a very attractive pub with a friendly ambience. At least, that is what the reviews were telling me. However, having been to the pub I can say with complete confidence that those four star reviews were utterly wrong and I think that the people who wrote these reviews must have had one too many. That is the only explanation I can find as to why they were so blinded.

I stepped into the pub to find that the lights were switched off and the daylight did its best to filter in through the layers of filth that had amalgamated onto the window. The distorted sunlight that did manage to come into the dark pub hit peoples' faces at strange angles. It seemed like a thriller night in April due to the concave cheeks of most of the drinkers.

Once inside the pub, I noticed that the distorted sunlight was only a quarter of the problem. The air looked thick and as grimy as the windows. I inhaled and instantly got a whiff of unpleasant body odour that filled the atmosphere, whilst the disgusting stench of cigarettes wafted from the leather seats, that were situated around the room, and hit me like a bulldozer. A corpulent being struggled in through the back door. His yellow face matched the walls. To be honest he could have done with one less spare tyre. Layers of far from his colossal stomach hung over his grey jogging bottoms and his belly wobbled as he shuffled his feet across the wooden floor. He wiped his hands over his stubbly chin and greeted his friends with an inaudible sound. His friends emulated this sound. They looked worn and weathered, possible due to a tsunami of work. The fat man and his friends gathered around the glowing remnants of a fire that sat opposite the bar, whilst the flames cast grotesque shadows of the men on the maroon, cracked and broken and ceiling.

At the bar, an old barmaid pulled a pint of Guinness for a hefty biker type that had large, artistic and brightly coloured tattoos slithering up his muscular arms, hissing at anyone who tried to talk to him whilst he was having some quality time with his drink. His leather jacket lay forgotten on the stool next to him and he let out a vociferous sound after gulping down his Guinness in five seconds flat. An impressive record.

The chattering among the drinkers was shattered as a screech from a wannabe pop star took to the stage in an attempt to provide the drinkers with some entertainment. I remember wondering whether I should get her kicked off the stage. I was half wiling to go up on the stage myself and replace her act. Anything to stop the atrocious sound that was penetrating my ears and the ears of everyone else in the room. Many people seemed in awe that someone could even sound that bad. With the shock of the sound, everyone turned their heads momentarily towards the singer and the commotion that came with her entrance. They all soon ignored the bellowing singer, taking more interest in the various assortments of drinks.

In the corner of the pub was a battered pool table that was standing on his last legs. A couple of middle aged blokes stood around the table. Pool balls replaced their pupils, as a result of staring at them so much. One of the guys eventually lined up a shot and the speckled balls hit each other with such ferocity that they spiralled out of control over the green ocean as if the slightest touch burned their skins.

To the side of the pool table were a bunch of arcade games which stood proudly. Their gleam invites people in, like meat to a pack of perished and snarling wolves, to have a go and rid them of the jackpot inside. Their flashing lights and occasional chorus of music is their way of taunting and laughing at all of the punters who have tried and failed to gain some money from these machines.

This was different from most of the pubs I have been to. In the fact that other pubs have pine tables, bright halogen lights, fake ornamental plants, cool air conditioning and a smell of coffee that hits you as soon as you set foot inside of the pub, not the smell of body odour and foul cigarettes.

Despite not wanting to stay, my mouth was very dry so I decided to try a pint of their Guinness that the biker guy had enjoyed so much. Even though the stools by the bar looked rather tatty I must say that they were surprisingly comfy. The old barmaid and I exchanged pleasantries whilst she was pulling me a pint. Once she has handed over a pint in exchange for £3.50, I took an eager sip. I suddenly knew why the biker was making those sounds and I can take an educated guess as to why this pub got a four star review. If this review was based only on the drinks, I would give it a five.

So despite being grimy and tatty, the singers not doing their jobs and the horrible smell, the Cartwheel pub has promise due to its fine drinks and staff.

This pub gets three out of five stars.
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